來自雅思前考官的備考秘籍：雅思寫作Part2從構思到段落

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來自英國的Simon是雅思考試的前考官。他創(chuàng)辦的ielts-simon.com網站有許多雅思備考不可多得寶貴資料。每天他都會在網站上更新一個簡短的小課程，我們將其搬運過來并翻譯成中文，供大家學習參考。

來自英國的Simon是雅思考試的前考官。他創(chuàng)辦的ielts-simon網站有許多雅思備考不可多得寶貴資料。每天他都會在網站上更新一個簡短的小課程，我們將其搬運過來并翻譯成中文，供大家學習參考。

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IELTS Writing Task 2: from plan to paragraph

雅思寫作 Part 2：從構思到段落

When you have written a plan, you then need to turn your notes into full sentences. Let's try this using the paragraph plan below.

當你構思完畢后，你需要把你的筆記變成完整的句子。讓我們嘗試使用下面的段落構思。

Paragraph plan:

段落構思：

- High street shops are disappearing because of online stores.

由于網店的出現(xiàn)，商業(yè)街的實體商店正在消失。

- Online shopping is faster, cheaper and more convenient.

網上購物更快捷，更便宜，更方便。

- People can sit at home, search for deals, receive delivery the next day.

人們可以坐在家里搜索訂單，第二天就可以收到快遞。

- It is impossible for normal stores to compete with the range of choice.

一般商店不可能在選擇范圍上與網店競爭。

- Personal example: recent purchases on Amazon.

個人例子:最近在亞馬遜上購買的商品。

Full paragraph:

完整段落：

In my opinion, high street shops are disappearing due to competition from online shopping websites, which are cheaper and more convenient. Web-based stores allow customers to search for the best deals, make purchases from the comfort of their homes, and receive delivery of their purchased items the next day. Furthermore, it is impossible for traditional bricks-and-mortar stores to compete with the range of choice that can be found online. For example, I recently used the website Amazon to buy some fairly rare academic textbooks that were not stocked at my local bookshop. As a customer, the fact that I can find any product imaginable online makes it almost pointless for me to make a trip to my local high street.

在我看來，網上購物更便宜，更方便，所以這使得實體商店正在消失。網絡的商店允許客戶搜索最優(yōu)訂單，在舒適的家中購物，并在第二天收到他們購買的物品。此外，傳統(tǒng)的實體店不可能與網店在選擇范圍上進行競爭。例如，我最近使用亞馬遜網站購買了一些在我當?shù)氐臅昀镔I不到的相當罕見的學術課本。作為一名顧客，我可以在網上找到任何我想買的產品，這讓我去當?shù)氐纳虡I(yè)街購物變得幾乎毫無意義。